Whenever I am bored, I try to write some lyrics, poem,or free writing that express my feeling toward some thing in my day. I was usual to write about the secret story or some stories that has hidden message. I think this "poem" shows a person who wants to express his or her feeling to his or her lover.
Here is the writing:
As long as I am with you
I can not go wrong
Oh baby, what you do to me?
You are the one
I have been trying to see you
For such a long long time
Maybe I am just sad to face that I
But I would not lie
When it comes to loving you
All the things that I would do
No matter what it is
Been waiting for this day for far too long
I never could imagine it so strong
Have not change to loving another
But as long as I am with you, I can not go wrong
Oh baby, what you do to me ?
You are the one
How I try to reach you
Oh, in every way I can
Whether it is so far
But it is hard to find a way to show
That I am your man
When it comes to loving you
All the things that I would do
only for you, baby
I will continues to love you
Until you said you say stop to me
I am loving you, baby
my forever love!
What do you guys feel about the writing?? Good or sucks or normal ?????
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